Re: Submission Package Critique Combos

For the entire month of March 2017, I’m giving away free, 1-pass critiques of synopses with the purchase of any 2-pass Query Critique for $45.00.

What do authors get for $45.00? As much value as I can pack into feedback, of course!

2-pass Query Critiques offer in-depth analysis of your present query to highlight the most important aspects of your pitch and will include feedback on brief author bios if authors would like. My goal will be to help authors pitch their manuscripts in ways that will radiate with voice and leave agents hungry for pages.

1-pass Synopsis Critiques will be included for any 2-pass Query Critique purchased from 01 Mar 2017 to 01 Apr 2017. These critiques will help authors find the best 500 words to lay out the characters, plot, and events of their novels while also helping to cut extraneous information that agent’s don’t need in order to fall in love with a project.

Additional Terms and Conditions

These critiques are open to all age categories from Middle Grade to Adult (including New Adult) but are limited to genres I have listed on my Author Services page. Mind you, it’s not a small list, so I’m likely to cover what authors have poured their souls into creating.

Authors can expect 5-7 days of turn-around on their first passes for Query Critiques or Synopsis Critiques and 3-5 days for second passes on queries. Authors have until 30 Apr 2017 to send me their second query passes for the maximum of 5 days turn-around. After that, returning the second passes will be subject to my availability during the editing phases of #P2P17.

If interested in taking advantage of my Submission Package Critique Combos Offer, feel free to contact me at to get started. Please include your query and synopsis as separate Word attachments.


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